miércoles, 4 de junio de 2008

The Deal

Aki ta el cuento ek tuve ke hacer para el concurso...ajaja lo subo para ke no se borre nunca... =)


The place was very quiet, tranquility flooded every corner and made feel chill to the strongest person. The walls looked infinity because of the darkness, but the most weird for him was the feeling that darkness took his heart wanting to scream for the fear, but he couln´t do anything because he couldn´t show like a coward man, all his life he had been a winner.

- “I´m a winner, I always get what I want!! I can´t forget a successful life... “ He said to himself over and over again, and he was right, Adam Jonas had been a very important person, a business man, his life could not get better until he made the Mistake of his life and from that moment everything changed dramatically.

- “What I´m doing here?? What I did wrong?? If everything went according to plan

- What happened? I can´t believe that I am living such a nightmare!”

Adam Jonas, lived in New York city, he was young, very handsome and apparently had a dream life, his favorite words were “well, we make a deal” .

He had a so fast life that he did not even have time left to regreat, so he had not realized if something was missing, but apparently everything was OK.

Every day, he gets up about six thirty , then, if he has time, he has a light breakfast (he can´t waste a second), but there is a must in his life: never leave the house without a luxurious dress and grooming well, and of course without his personal computer and diary where he has his day to day plannig. Everything in his elegant leather briefcase, then he drives his car to his office, at about 130 km/h because it is part of his life to do everything in a hurry. When reaching at his office, looks if everything is all right , while his secretary is carrying a strong black coffee, and begins to see what is the best deal of the day . No matter what he has to do, he has to get the best part of any business, for him, there is no other possibility but winning.

Despite all his feeling that something is going wrong he never knows what and keeps on going.

Adam, has reached the top of his career, in five years he has achieved only successful business. But part of this has been using lies and fraud and things like that. For him everything is going well until he makes his mortal mistake: “falling in love”.

He met Chelsea Staub doing business with a very successful company, and from the very beginning he stared at her beautiful eyes he knew that she was special. Chelsea was a very prominent executive and they had been classmates in the university, so when he knew that he should do business with her, he was sure that she would always  be true to him.

This business was most important than all previous ones and he invested all his money and time hoping that finally he would get the triple. All seemed to be perfect including things really important for him, money, success and also Chelsea´s love. But there was something he really didn´t know and this was that he was about to fall in his own trap.

Chelsea had everything planned from the start, she was same type or worse than him and she would use all possible ways to take what she wanted. One of her favorite slogans was "I can change the world to anything I want". “He was her target now” and there was no possibility he could escape, she had all under control, she was the “boss”.

The start of the trap, began without him realizing, since she was very subtle and adept to everything that was planning. They began to have a much deeper relationship, where Chelsea used all her skills of seduction and in which Adam was able to fully enjoy, he could not see the true intentions that she had for him.

Supposedly the business would be a success for both, so Adam invited Chelsea to dinner, this way they could talk about their plans and their love.

-I just love the day that I saw you for the first time and we decided to unite our lives, from that day everything is like living in a dream. Can you tell me, Why you are so perfect? How could we do this brilliant business?

Adam, says these words to Chelsea, while looking at her intense blue eyes.

-Please Adam, I asked you not to talk about business in the dinner, I don´t like to mix up this beautiful relation with the job.

Adam, adored her and was so deeply in love that he didn’t realize that this was part of her strategy and a lot of coldness to manipulate things.

“-Why I didn´t realize the plans that she had for me? Now, this place really scares me ... fallen in love !!! ME? How could I forget that I’m business man.”

The great day came, when they had to close the deal he had prepared for such a long time, and Adam was very excited because this was something that would change his life completely, and he was right, though he did not know how.

He went home, as usual and convinced that he had made the best deal of his life.

The person who was really happy and pleased of this excellent chance in her life was Chelsea. She had succeeded in deceiving Adam and now could go away, sure of not leaving any evidence to blame on her.

The next day Adam, started his usual routine, but at the very moment he arrive at his office he felt that something happened. As soon as entering the building he saw a police car and in his office there were two policemen waiting for him. “What were they doing there?” He wondered.

- Mister Jonas, plesea come with us.

- What?? What do you mean ?Are you sure?

Adam knew in a second that his dearest Chelsea had deceived him, and now the winner should go to jail, because had had cheated thousands of people and this time, he had to pay every fraud he had done in his life.

- I´m here, in jail and nobody can help me. Now I have time to think, and realize that everything I took for granted is lost. I feel cheated, frustrated ,I just think of the fact that my favourite words led me to this!!! I was born to be a winner and now I feel like a wretched criminal or even worse ... I thought I would never fall, but now it's too late, I feel like an idiot because I can not make time come back ... Now there’s nothing left to do or say…

I was thinking about this, when I heard her name. We were called to testify.

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